Lila brought home a partially completed story that she's working on at school and it's too good not to share (complete with spelling errors)!
"One day I was jumping in a volcano! It was a good thing I was wering safty gear becas I went all the way to magma. it was hot! I was amased at the site of magma. It was cool. I loved it! It was so awsom I did not want to go. It was geting shaky. I knew it was time to go. I took one last look at it. I ran as fast as I could. Running made me tired so I stoped to eat some chocolate. Then I ran all--"
That's where it ends, rather abruptly. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Or maybe that's where it ended because the magma caught up to her while she was stopping to eat chocolate...
1 comment:
Nah! If the magma had caught up with her she wouldn't be around to write the story. Besides, chocolate has amazing properties we, as adults, tend to forget.
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